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Feature Poem--glassorchid by ~BlackDove42:iconBlackDove42:



Never did a more imperious courtesan live
I swear, you make the whores of Rome seem kind.
Did I not dress in enough green?
You cast your dark cloud over my conscience,
And even now I hear you quietly nagging
Like a gadfly buzzing around an ox.
I give you every waking moment I possibly can,
I give you only my fullest attention.
When I give, it is the best (I think) I can offer you.
And yet you shun me with your grey eyes.
I sacrifice more tears that I can count.
For years, I was your humble and loyal suppliant.
Wretched goddess, are you as passionate as I?
I favored your cold indifference,
But now has your marble face turned hot with anger?
I sacrifice my dignity and my health at your altar
Yet your hungry mouth cannot be sated.
Seductive beast, tell me what you crave.
Must I give up one pound of my Semitic flesh?
©2008-2009 ~BlackDove42
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Author's Comments

Yeah, it's been a while. Hopefully, this poem should explain why it's been so long. Also, anyone watching my scraps will notice the other thing that I've been posting lately. I hope that ~GlassOrchid doesn't mind the vitriol of this poem.

It's about science personified because I get so angry and upset sometimes with my studies. Points to anyone who giggles at the reference I made at the end of the poem.

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:iconblackdove42:
Wow, thank you very much! I think it helps that I wrote from genuine emotion rather than trying to contrive something. I think that you can probably tell when I'm writing from emotion and when I'm experimenting. I wrote this late last night and finished it up this morning. Thank you again, and I apologize for not posting more stuff recently. Hopefully, that will change. Thank you for the comment^^

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If holidays were twelve months long
And life were games and fun
And all the skies
Were filled with PSI's
...Would thinking still get done?


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:iconzansatsu:
*hands you a basket of cookies and a jug of milk* I'm sorry you've been so stressed out and the like. Tis an awesome poem though. ^^ Yay for the suffering artist. XD

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"If you find you are falling into madness - dive." - Malkavian proverb

"Destroyer. Devourer. Defiler. I am of all of these. I am of the Wyrm." - Zansatsu
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I'd also like to add that I love the imagery yet again. You always were able to provoke thought and picture in my head. ^^

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"If you find you are falling into madness - dive." - Malkavian proverb

"Destroyer. Devourer. Defiler. I am of all of these. I am of the Wyrm." - Zansatsu
:iconblackdove42:
I'll reply to both comments in this one.

First, thank you <3 People always say suffering artist, but someone should really coin the phrase "angsty scientist" or something similar. But I guess even they could be called artists. True scientists like to suffer for their art, and I feel that I've suffered plenty.

And huzzah for good imagery! You might be able to tell where I pulled some of the images, like the comment on wearing green coming from Greensleeves. I'm still waiting for someone to comment on the very last line :3

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If holidays were twelve months long
And life were games and fun
And all the skies
Were filled with PSI's
...Would thinking still get done?


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:iconzansatsu:
*nods* I thought that might be where the green came from. Lol. Sweetness. ^^ In any case, I hope you do get more comments but considering how DA is...I wouldn't hold my breath. *sighs*

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"If you find you are falling into madness - dive." - Malkavian proverb

"Destroyer. Devourer. Defiler. I am of all of these. I am of the Wyrm." - Zansatsu
:iconblackdove42:
I'll have to note ~GlassOrchid and see if she likes it too.

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If holidays were twelve months long
And life were games and fun
And all the skies
Were filled with PSI's
...Would thinking still get done?


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:iconhotaru-sama666:
I got some pretty dark imagery while reading this. It was a good read. :)

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"Du kannst, Du willst und wirst nie vergeben
und Du verteufelst sein ganzes Leben
treibst in den Wahnsinn von
maßlosem Zorn, Vernichtung und Rache,
Du bist zum Hassen gebor'n!"
:iconblackdove42:
Thank you kindly. It should be dark because I am just supremely frustrated with everything that is going on now. Maybe things will clear up and I can stop being so freaked out.

--
If holidays were twelve months long
And life were games and fun
And all the skies
Were filled with PSI's
...Would thinking still get done?


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