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Feature Poem--Sinkato by ~BlackDove42:iconBlackDove42:



My sisters knew no mother's breast
My brothers knew no quiet rest
But we swam around the deep eddy
And played upon the cold green sea

On a whaling ship I stole
But they found me in the hold
I said, "I'm an orphan and hungry
Let me sail upon the cold green sea."

My own ship I soon gained
And great renown and fame
"A mighty captain," they called me,
"The man who tamed the cold green sea."

My ship's wheel is my betrothal ring
The gulls' cries are my church bell dings
My guests, the moon and stars and breeze
And my bride is the cold green sea

Through rich cities I have been
And the might of tyrants I have seen
But no wealth will do for me
My heart longs for the cold green sea

I fought demons from the deep
For each crewman I did weep
But I sail swift as a banshee
While married to the cold green sea

The brine fills my veins
Sirens carve up my weary brain
I fall below so fast and free
At last I join the cold green sea
©2008-2009 ~BlackDove42
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Author's Comments

EDIT: I didn't see how many errors were in this poem because I was typing it up so quickly >.<

Yet another poem.

This was inspired by yet another song called "Cold Green Sea" by Jim and Jennie and The Pinetops. They're based in Asheville, NC and it's very hard to find any of their lyrics. I really wish that I could find the tune and words to the song for comparison. The best thing you can do for yourself is find them on Pandora and build a station based on their music. The song will come up eventually. For those curious and who are long-time watchers, the speaker here might be familiar.

Hopefully, I can finish these up after exams. I apologize for some of the irregularities.

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:iconspriglief:
Really enjoyed this one. :)
:iconblackdove42:
Thank you very much^^ I had the song running through my head and just felt compelled to write something.

--
If holidays were twelve months long
And life were games and fun
And all the skies
Were filled with PSI's
...Would thinking still get done?


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:iconpandatheninja:
Really enjoyed the choice of words in this one, and the the style. It's very Gordon Lightfoot-esque. I love it.

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Quit work, make art.
:iconblackdove42:
Huzzah, thank you! I've only heard "The Wreck of the Edmund Fitzgerald" so I'm glad that I was able to emulate him^^

--
If holidays were twelve months long
And life were games and fun
And all the skies
Were filled with PSI's
...Would thinking still get done?


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:iconhotaru-sama666:
Very prett. This really makes me miss the days of going out on the boat shrimping with my dad. :)

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"Du kannst, Du willst und wirst nie vergeben
und Du verteufelst sein ganzes Leben
treibst in den Wahnsinn von
maßlosem Zorn, Vernichtung und Rache,
Du bist zum Hassen gebor'n!"

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